My Very First WIP Blog Hop!

First off, I want to thank all of the feedback from my beautiful beta readers. Everyone has brought different points of view and really helped me to see a clear direction of where I am going. Please remember this story is still very rough and very much a work in progress. Thank you to Melody for starting this wonderful blog hop. I am so thrilled that I am on way to being considered a fellow author, not just a review. Without further ado here is an excerpt of what I am working on. Thank you for stopping by and enjoy!

Derek grabbed her guiding her to bend over his lap. She was hesitant but followed his silent command. He grabbed the flimsy white material and pulled it over her backside revealing her plump lobes. He softly massaged over both cheeks before placing a light slap across her left cheek. She burst out into giggles sidetracking him.

“What in the world do you find so funny Little One?” A hint of amusement played in his voice.

“Here I am freshly married, in my early thirties, bent over and now getting spanked. Does this not seem just a tad silly that you have a grown woman over your knee like a six year old?” She burst into another fit of giggles allowing a snort to escape.

He answered her by smacking her right cheek harder. She yelped in answer as Derek placed six more swats across both cheeks. The white flesh turning a bright shade of pink. He rubbed over the sore cheeks feeling the heat radiate from them. Derek silently willed his own arousal to disappear focusing on pleasuring Larissa. He peppered her ass with several swats never hitting the same spot twice. She moaned in approval every now and then yelping from the sting. Derek kneaded her ass running his finger across her bottom hole following down to her folds. The scrap of material was soaked. Derek ran his middle finger over the material eliciting a low moan from Larissa. He grabbed the flimsy G-string and tugged hard ripping in half. Larissa grunted as he ripped her underwear.  He let out a low chuckle as he spread her folds finding her sweet spot. He took one finger and moved it inside her pussy feeling her walls squeeze against them. This wasn’t their first time having sex but it sure felt like it. Larissa involuntarily bucked her hips against him trying to get him to hit her sweet spot.

“Take off your heels and lay on your back Little One. Spread your legs for me.”

Larissa crawled up on the bed feeling vulnerable. She was exposed and Derek had never looked at her during sex. She usually had him turn off the lights because she was ashamed of her body. She wasn’t overly obese but she wasn’t a twig either. This was a defining moment in their relationship and she felt the shift within. She was letting go of control and trusting Derek to give her what she needed and for him to take what he wanted. For the first time in her life Larissa felt free. She spread her legs apart baring herself for him. She was raw and knew deep within this was defining moment in their relationship.

“Touch yourself for me Larissa, show me how you please yourself when I am not around.” Derek’s voice was raw as he spoke. Even though Larissa hadn’t realized it, Derek was baring himself in this moment too.

As Larissa let her fingers guide to her pussy she watched Derek. Derek was tanned and well defined. He woke up in the wee hours of the morning for a grueling workout. He had been made fun of a kid and vowed never to return to that place. His short chestnut brown hair was mussed in that sex hair sort of way. Larissa opened her folds with her left hand letting her middle finger roam over her heated clit.

She watched Derek undress finding herself more aroused by his slow tortuous display. He was now shirtless working on the button of his pants. He gave her his best boyish smile as he took his time taking each leg out of his pants. Larissa took her right hand and brushed her palm over nipple letting out a low moan as the peak hardened under her light touch. She closed her eyes taking a moment to imagine how Derek would take her tonight.

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